Sticker: Feedback / Further Development
Asking tutors for feedback with regards to this design direction they responded critically saying there felt to be bit too much of a divide better the food illustrations used for the posters and the architectural style taken for the rest of the illustrations and suggested I may have taken it off on a tangent. Keen to Incorporate both of these style into my campaign I asked for specific feedback as to how to bring these two aesthetics holistically together. From this I brainstormed with tutors ways in which to achieve this and concluded implementing food within the architectural illustrations would converge these directions and ensure a consistent aesthetic throughout that presents an engaging and succinct campaign to the audience.
From this I altered the circles to be lemons and incorporated a fork into the grid, this creates connotations of food and brings the aesthetic back to a aesthetic debate of food as opposed to architecture which works more appropriately for the concept of the campaign.
Asking tutors for feedback with regards to this design direction they responded critically saying there felt to be bit too much of a divide better the food illustrations used for the posters and the architectural style taken for the rest of the illustrations and suggested I may have taken it off on a tangent. Keen to Incorporate both of these style into my campaign I asked for specific feedback as to how to bring these two aesthetics holistically together. From this I brainstormed with tutors ways in which to achieve this and concluded implementing food within the architectural illustrations would converge these directions and ensure a consistent aesthetic throughout that presents an engaging and succinct campaign to the audience.
From this I altered the circles to be lemons and incorporated a fork into the grid, this creates connotations of food and brings the aesthetic back to a aesthetic debate of food as opposed to architecture which works more appropriately for the concept of the campaign.
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